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Clean-Up In Aisle 2

by DanStanding on October 13, 2011 at 5:01 am
Posted In: 17 - Corsets and Loose Threads: Part 2
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  1. CrypticMirror
    October 13, 2011, 7:36 am | # | Reply

    Less talkie, more running. Although I can understand Peonie’s reluctance to run given that every step must carry such a massive risk of giving herself a black eye. Without some form of support, a race is really, really, really, gonna hurt.

  2. Hikaro
    October 13, 2011, 7:37 am | # | Reply

    Why is only the shoulder and arm of the closest one see-through? Shouldn’t the whole thing be?

  3. Galdon
    October 13, 2011, 7:45 am | # | Reply

    Hurry up Peonie; you have a leg up on them right now!

  4. Doc Savage
    October 13, 2011, 8:12 am | # | Reply

    Don’t say it, Do it!

  5. CanadianKitten
    October 13, 2011, 9:03 am | # | Reply

    Guys guys guys, chill on the whole running, bouncing, naked girl. Focus on the STORY. @Hikaro, the jello is transparent as its attempting to pull itself together. Its only “solid” when its whole in form. I’d *really* like to see this arc move forward tho. WAY too much time spent on naked girl. More *STORY* Please!!

  6. deanatay
    October 13, 2011, 9:13 am | # | Reply

    The Gelateonies do tend to get denser and more opaque the longer they’re in a form, it seems. I still think it has something to do with blood – the more blood they have in them, the more they can do with their bodies.

    BTW, there were three of them earlier… just sayin’… watch yer oh-so-delicious backside, Peonie!

  7. Fairportfan
    October 13, 2011, 9:25 am | # | Reply

    Her boob is opaque because it’s in front of Peonie’s cute little kitty.

  8. Azure
    October 13, 2011, 9:31 am | # | Reply

    … Ok, this is starting to get old.

  9. dragondeathlord
    October 13, 2011, 10:09 am | # | Reply

    They must be Jello, Jam don’t shake like this!
    Sorry the pun/Quote needed to be done..
    Forgive me.

  10. Galdon
    October 14, 2011, 7:42 am | # | Reply

    CanadianKitten: They can’t very well rush the action sequences to move the plot along; I think its better that the nude sequences can be done with the same pacing as other scenes as though there was nothing out of place. it removes the “omg look boobz pay attention to meee” feeling a lot of shows and comics try to pull when something is flashed during an action scene.

  11. BMeph
    October 15, 2011, 4:14 am | # | Reply

    @Hikaro: They are more translucent than transparent, but…notice the “mud line” on the butt of the left one? Look closer; it’s the hedges behind “her” that we’re seeing.

  12. Hikaro
    October 15, 2011, 7:46 am | # | Reply

    @BMeph Thanks, I didn’t notice that at all.

    @ CanadianKitten This is a webcomic written and drawn by guys, FOR guys. Of course there will be naked girls, bouncing boobs, and an overall emphasis on fanservice, that’s just par for the course. I, as a perverted male, was drawn to this comic for these very reasons.

  13. DanStanding
    October 15, 2011, 8:56 am | # | Reply

    Although EXIERN is written/drawn/edited by males, it is our sincerest hope and goal that it was/is/will be enjoyed by all readers, regardless of gender.

    But some pages do lean one way more than the other…I’m hoping some upcoming ones will help bring the balance again.

  14. Anudder horny old wretch
    October 15, 2011, 9:17 am | # | Reply

    Well, now that’s settled, lets go back to gratituous T&A whilst also telling a story.
    And the unicorn reveals that Tiffany is indeed confirmed as a virgin.
    Hmm… wonder if the UNICORN is a virgin? Perhaps our princess is attempting the wrong sort of physical interaction with the poor fellow…

  15. CrypticMirror
    October 15, 2011, 9:47 am | # | Reply

    It’s just for guys? Dammit, I guess I have to stop reading now.

    Although I could be persuaded to stay by some more strips with Tiff acting all so cutely bewildered and confused (she does it so well) like back when Denver first showed up. Or some more fanservice with his majesty being such a wicked-suave magnificent bastard. I love that guy.

  16. DanStanding
    October 15, 2011, 9:51 am | # | Reply

    @CrypticMirror – Ha, definitely keep reading then…especially for the last bit…

  17. deanatay
    October 15, 2011, 9:54 am | # | Reply

    Yeah, this comic definitely has the feel of a scene-ender, so we’ll probably be jumping to someone else in the next one – Tiff waking up, maybe? Or more saucy King action? I can’t wait!

  18. TJ
    October 15, 2011, 2:32 pm | # | Reply

    I have read one comic written by a female that has more NSFW images of girls then this. The gender should not mater, the work they put into it, should be all that maters. As long as it been fun like it has been, i will contiune to read Exiern, 😀

  19. Drowemos
    October 15, 2011, 4:38 pm | # | Reply

    Sorry about nudepocalypse on the last couple pages. It was supposed to be much shorter but I kept on thinking of silly things to have happen between the Peonie and her Jello duplicates.

    Also it was my last hurrah as writer so while I could have cut it down I decided to keep it in just to say thanks to all the people who have paid for this comic over the years. Yes that is how I say goodbye with random boobage.

    We will be back to a pretty darn good story brought to you by the new writer very soon.

  20. Dayna
    October 15, 2011, 6:43 pm | # | Reply

    k. 1) its transparent where it is and isn’t where it isn’t because if you wanna see inked in private bits… buy a membership.
    2) I’m tired of the naked stuff… So are most of the other women reading your story. Less naked stuff more story stuff.

  21. nikkijo
    October 16, 2011, 3:28 pm | # | Reply

    i agree with Dayna. Drowemos,you have ruined my life(lol), i can’t seam to go a day without stopping here to see what nonsence you would come up with,while i look forward to the new writing, i will always think fondly of your work here. huggs, nicole

  22. Ghost
    October 16, 2011, 9:48 pm | # | Reply

    Looking back through the comments, there seem to be a lot of people going on about too much nudity or whatever. While I’ll agree that too much of anything makes it lose impact, I don’t really care all that much if there is nudity. Just ignore it or pretend they’re wearing clothes if it bothers you. It doesn’t detract from the story at all, it provides continuity (there are people and they happen to be naked because of a particular series of circumstances that occured throughout the story), which is something that is always important to stories/comics. If Peonie happens to find a piece of cloth to cover herself with in the next couple of pages, fine. If not, I look forward to seeing her get back to the castle and expalin to the King why she’s been running around outside with no clothes on while there is a ball with many important leaders going on.

    And I can quite proudly say that although I am a woman, I am not “tired of the naked stuff,” and I have to say that it does get annoying when people presume to speak for the majority. So long as the art and story is good (which it certainly is), I’ll keep reading, even if there was nothing but page after page of armies of naked Peonies.

  23. deanatay
    October 17, 2011, 8:51 am | # | Reply

    That’s just like Drowemos – to go out servicing the fans. Thanks for everything, dude. I come to Exiern because I know I can find both a good story and lots of sexy lady bits. We’ll miss having you here, but you’ve built a good foundation, so this comic will be here a while.

  24. Hikaro
    October 17, 2011, 8:18 pm | # | Reply

    Nudity is important to the future of our children, KEEP IT COMING!

  25. WindSinger37
    October 19, 2011, 4:25 am | # | Reply

    just show us King going for a swim in warm water or Denver in his birthday suit and all will be well 😉

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