Comments on: Fourteen Years of Exiern and Look Who’s Back http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/ Swords, Sorcery, And Then Some! Thu, 19 Sep 2019 06:34:43 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.9.11 By: Guesticus http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42699 Wed, 11 Sep 2019 16:50:39 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42699 Howsabout just letting the writer and artist tell their story

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By: Doug http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42549 Tue, 10 Sep 2019 16:54:19 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42549 Also, zoom out a bit and lets see more of the character than just face and hands. Let’s see the person and surrounds. In bright, bold, colours. And in more dynamic action. Have you seen Schlock Mercenary? Not that, but definitely more that than this.

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By: Guesticus http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42536 Tue, 10 Sep 2019 14:16:26 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42536 Back when The Flintstone’s was the epitome of Western (North American) cartoons 😛

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By: Guesticus http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42535 Tue, 10 Sep 2019 14:13:16 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42535 Personally feel you fit as much story as is needed in each page: some pages have a lot, some pages do not

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By: ScottHicken http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42421 Mon, 09 Sep 2019 15:37:59 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42421 Thanks for making ME think about how I remember the days before The Simpsons existed…oi…

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By: ScottHicken http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42415 Mon, 09 Sep 2019 14:19:02 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42415 I write for very few panels per page, Antipus usually expands more than what I initially script, so that last note is for me. 🙂

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By: Guesticus http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42413 Mon, 09 Sep 2019 14:14:11 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42413 And have you noticed how the art on that show changed over the years? Or were you not around when it debuted on “The Tracy Ullman Show”?

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By: Doug http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42410 Mon, 09 Sep 2019 13:41:18 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42410 Bolder colours, less shadows and details. Let emotions come through as the primary vehicle for characterisation. Have Tiff blush more. Fit more story into each strip.
HTH

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By: Antipus http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42395 Mon, 09 Sep 2019 11:11:15 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42395 I am always here and I like the criticism of my work, I accept suggestions to improve.

best

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By: Doug http://archive.exiern.com/comic/fourteen-years-of-exiern-and-look-whos-back/#comment-42265 Sun, 08 Sep 2019 15:35:53 +0000 http://archive.exiern.com/?post_type=comic&p=10229#comment-42265 The Simpsons are dope. May they never change.

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